13 Jul '20 MON

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Sentence-making exercise:


earth
goes
round
sun
the
the

all
lead
roads
rome
to

bird
catches
early
the
the
worm

barking
bite
do
dogs
not

(followed by page 23, Language Arts)

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Input 1

About me

My name is Ramakrishna. I am Indian and my mother tongue is Telugu. I am a teacher. English and math are my favourite subjects. Apart from these, I love books, music and cooking. I don't have many friends. I spend most of my time with my family. I don't go out much.

Response


Hi my name is Sri Kamala Saathvika Tetali. My nickname is Shiney. My mother tougue is Telugu. My favorite subjects are Art ,Music AND READING COMPRAHENSHION. I like to read books a lot.

Suggestions:


Hi1 my2 name is Sri Kamala Saathvika Tetali. My nickname is Shiney. My mother tougue is Telugu. My favorite subjects are Art3 ,Music4 AND5 READING COMPRAHENSHION6. I like to read books a lot.

1 Hi!
2 My
3 art
4 music
5 and
6 reading comprehension


Corrected version: Hi! My name is Sri Kamala Saathvika Tetali. My nickname is Shiney. My mother tougue is Telugu. My favorite subjects are art, music and reading comprehension. I like to read books a lot.

Input 2

India

My country is India. It is a big country. It has a large population too. It has famous mountains like the Himalayas. And there are famous rivers like the Ganga and the Godavari. Many languages are spoken in the country. Languages like Telugu, Tamil are spoken in the south of India. Hindi is spoken in the north of India. South Indians mostly eat rice. North Indians eat rotis more. Most people in India are farmers. India is not a very rich country but it is a great country
.
Response


My country I the live in is the second biggest country. It has mountains such as The Rocky Mountain. There are also famous rivers like The Misisipi  R\iver. Also many languages are spoken in amaric a In the country they eat rice and meat. In usa  right now the president is Donald trump

Suggestions:

My1 country I the3 live in is the …4. 5second biggest country. It has …6 mountains such as 7The Rocky Mountain8. There are also famous rivers like 9The Misisipi10  11R\12iver. 13Also many languages are spoken in 14amaric a In the country they15 eat rice and meat. In usa16  right now the president17 is Donald trump18

1 The
3 X
4 United States.
5 It is the
6 great
7 the
8 Mountains
9 the
10 Mississippi
11 river
12 X
13 X
14 the US.
15 People here mostly
16 the US,
18 Trump

Corrected version: The country I live in is the United States of America.  It is the second biggest country. It has great mountains such as the Rocky Mountains. There are also famous rivers like the Mississippi. Many languages are spoken in the US such as English, Spanish and Chinese.
The country I live in is the United States of America.  It is the second biggest country. It has great mountains such as the Rocky Mountains. There are also famous rivers like the Mississippi. Many languages are spoken in the US such as English, Spanish and Chinese.

Input 3


Why math is great

Math is a very important subject. Some people think math is full of problems. That is not true. Math is actually full of solutions to problems. Everyone should learn math. It makes your mind sharp. Math does not mean addition, subtraction, multiplication and division. Math is the art of thinking. That is why it is my favourite subject.

Response


I like to read fiction books. I like to read them because they make me dream .Also some are fun and they make me laugh .And some are scary they make me scared. Some are advencheric so they make me go crazy. That is why I like to read books because they make me have different feeling when I read them.


Suggestions


I like to read1 fiction books. I like to read2 them because they make me dream3 . 4Also some are fun and they make me laugh5 . 6And some are scary they make me scared7. Some are advencheric8 so9 they make me go crazy. That is why I like to read books because10 they make me have different feeling11 when I read them.



1 reading
2 I like them
3 delete space
4 insert space
5 delete space
6 insert space
7 delete space
8 adventurous
9 delete ‘so’, use a comma
10 end the sentence
11 feelings

Corrected version: I like reading fiction books. I like them because they make me dream. Also some are fun and they make me laugh. And some are scary, they scare me. Some are adventurous, they make me go crazy. That is why I like to read books. They make me have different feelings when I read them.

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